Neil Mehta’s Guide to Professional Philosophy


“It is often thought that philosophical excellence is the sole province of the genius. I by contrast believe that it can be achieved through countless small techniques that can be taught and learned.”

So writes Neil Mehta, professor of philosophy at National University of Singapore, in his, “A Guide to Professional Philosophy.”

In this post, I’ll share some excerpts from the introduction and conclusion of Mehta’s guide, which explain the why and how of its existence, as well as a link to the whole thing.

From the introduction:

It is often thought that philosophical excellence is the sole province of the genius. I by contrast believe that it can be achieved through countless small techniques that can be taught and learned; in any case, if there is some special talent here, then I do not have it. When, near the end of my graduate career, I began submitting my work to journals, I received 18 consecutive rejections distributed across 5 different manuscripts, with not even an invitation to revise-and-resubmit to cushion the blows. At last, on the 19th try, I secured my first publication in Philosophical Studies, and even that was merely a reply piece. I then undertook a disciplined program to improve my writing, and over the next several years my work climbed steadily in quality. I have now published a book with MIT Press and 17 articles in venues including Noûs, Journal of Philosophy, and Philosophy and Phenomenological Research. That does not make me a great philosopher: plenty of my colleagues have better records than this. It does, however, make me someone who has improved enormously, and here I will share precisely how that happened.

From the final section, “Cultivating Yourself as a Philosopher”:

This writing guide began with an autobiography, and it is time to finish the tale. After my miserable first outings in the world of publishing, I realized that I lacked crucial writing skills, and I resolved to fill in the gaps. I began by requesting all the feedback that I could get.

I met an obstacle straightaway. I would learn that I should include a particular citation, trim a particular section, and provide more evidence for a particular claim. But, although I could follow these pieces of advice, I had no idea what general principles were in operation. Thus I just repeated my mistakes elsewhere.

It was here that my lack of talent was made manifest, for talent, I conjecture, consists largely in the ability to pick up general principles from mere hints and examples. Like a talented dancer who sees a dramatic performance of the tango and just knows how to dance like that, a talented philosopher sees the ambitiousness of Plato and the systematicity of Kant and just knows how to write like that. The rest of us need to be told to lengthen our strides, square our hips, lift our chins.

Without the benefit of talent, I had to try to discover the precise but general principles of philosophical excellence. When advised to include a citation, trim a section, and provide more evidence for a claim, I attempted to articulate the precise general principles that warranted including that citation, trimming that section, and providing that evidence. Similarly, I sought exemplars of philosophical writing—for instance, I dug into the work of several philosophers who were consistently publishing in top journals—and attempted to articulate the precise general principles at play there. I also asked successful philosophers to tell me what works they regarded as best and why, what they saw as the best features of their own work, and what their processes of reading and writing were like.
I recorded what that I found in a document intended for personal use. That eventually expanded into this writing guide.

In these attempts to improve my writing, I was engaging in reflection at three levels. I was reflecting, first, on what makes for excellent philosophical work; second, on what makes for an excellent process of producing philosophical work; and third, on how a person can, without relying on talent, identify and learn those processes. I think of these levels as corresponding to goods, rules, and virtues that are distinctive to philosophy. My most basic advice on self-cultivation, then, is to carry out your own reflections across all three levels.

One practical method for doing that is to make your own guide to doing philosophy. (If you have internalized my previous advice about ambition and authority, then you will surely doubt much of what you find here.) Start small: whenever you read a great work of philosophy, write down what makes it great in precise but general terms. There’s no need to go it alone; discuss your ideas with friends and mentors. You can reserve your guide for personal use, but articulating your conception of philosophical excellence as precisely as you can will give you much more control over your work.

Cultivate yourself not only as a writer, but also as a thinker. Read broadly as well as deeply, taking time to appreciate great historical works. And be fearless about developing new skills at every stage of your career. It is never too late to acquaint yourself with Sanskrit, modal logic, or vision science.

Make sure to have a life beyond the profession, too. For us, philosophy is a part of the good life, but it is only a proper part. I rarely put in more than 40 hours per week of research, teaching, and service, and I make it my personal ideal to have satisfying personal relationships, practice hobbies, eat well, exercise regularly, meditate occasionally, and sleep plenty.

Do I manage all of that? Never! But I come close enough (and that is not particularly close) to be content.

In between the opening and the closing are 12 pages of advice on reading, writing, thinking, and publishing. Professor Mehta understands that his advice will at times be “contentious,” and he welcomes criticisms and suggestions, which can be raised in the comments and/or by email to him. Discussion welcome.

The full guide is below, and is also available here.

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Alice
Alice
9 months ago

There is a multitude of philosophical excellence, and perhaps one province of philosophical excellence is often inhabited by the genius. But all sorts of excellence are excellent.

Thanks for the guidance. It looks really helpful!

Edit: “genius” in the conventional sense.

Last edited 9 months ago by Alice
Alice
Alice
9 months ago

Reading through the document, everything resonates with me. Except for the very first item. Somehow I never make regimenting argument in P-C form work for me. Now I wonder why. Does anyone else feel the same at all?

Here’s my first speculation. There are often multiple ways of regimenting that are equally good, but they are different to the extent of inviting different sorts of responses. So in the end, any regimentation results in spending too much time with a particular form.

No idea how plausible this speculation is, though.

Daniel Weltman
Reply to  Alice
9 months ago

I can’t comfortably put anything except the simplest of arguments into premise-conclusion form. The main reason is the one you note: there are too many possible ways of doing so for me to pick one.

Queer Philosopher
Queer Philosopher
Reply to  Daniel Weltman
9 months ago

Arguably it was part of the original analytic ideal of “clarity” or “rigor” that you should have to pick one. If there are multiple possible regimentations, then your argument is vague insofar as there are substantive differences between these regimentations. Maybe in many cases there aren’t substantive differences between regimentation (but then why not pick one?).

Then again, P-C form can also give the mere appearance of rigor. Some people write like “A; if A then B; therefore B. The argument is valid, but is it sound?” and then give their argument for A entailing B to justify the premisses. Looks very philosophical and pleases very analytically inclined referees, but this is just a bell and a whistle.

It is probably folly to define clarity or rigor in terms of mere surface presentation. Nonetheless, if someone struggles with these it might not be bad advice to say “try writing in P-C form”.

Alice
Alice
Reply to  Queer Philosopher
9 months ago

(Not assuming anything nor trying to throw weight, but to the extent that personal context matters, I don’t take myself to be junior…)

Neil Mehta: if you are reading this, can you talk more about tones in writing. I struggle to balance between two extremes: one is (overly) cautious with lots of hedging, and the other is hyperbolic. the latter helps deliver message more clearly to an average reader, but also risks inaccuracy and strong pushbacks from niche experts. I know it is easy in theory to say avoid these extremes, but I don’t know any tricks to achieve that in practice. Appreciate it!

Neil Mehta
Neil Mehta
Reply to  Alice
9 months ago

Thanks for the question, Alice! I like to strike this balance by hedging my conclusions *very concisely*.

For instance, let’s say I’m arguing for contextualism. I wouldn’t say, “I conclude that contextualism is true.” That’s too strong.

Nor would I say, “In light of this, my view, so far at least, is that these arguments provide a significant degree of additional support for contextualism. That support is, of course, not conclusive, but it is still substantial and worth noting.” That’s too verbose.

I might, however, say, “I conclude that we have strong new evidence for contextualism.”

Daniel Weltman
Reply to  Queer Philosopher
9 months ago

We’re discussing his advice about summarizing other people’s work when you’re reading, not about his writing advice. So, we’re not talking about my argument. We’re talking about other people’s arguments.

Kenny Easwaran
Reply to  Queer Philosopher
9 months ago

I definitely find it a little tedious when someone formalizes their important argument as “A; if A then B; therefore B”, then gives a short and clear argument for A, and then takes 15 pages outlining their argument for “if A then B”. When that’s happened, I suspect that someone is following a cargo cult version of this advice.

On the other hand, when someone has come up with a precise but slightly convoluted definition of a property A, gives a nice and precise proof that property A entails property B, and then spends some time arguing that the example in question satisfies the convoluted definition of property A, that often seems somewhat more useful to me.

The precise but somewhat convoluted definition is probably still easier to work with than the natural language indicative conditional.

L. Y.
L. Y.
9 months ago

I respect Prof. Mehta and find the guide sensible and helpful, but am slightly uneased by the underlying assumption(?) that whether someone is a great philosopher is measurable by how often one publishes in pretigious venues (e.g. “I have now published a book with MIT Press and 17 articles in venues including NoûsJournal of Philosophy, and Philosophy and Phenomenological Research. That does not make me a great philosopher: plenty of my colleagues have better records than this.“)

opinion haver
opinion haver
Reply to  L. Y.
9 months ago

A great philosopher is someone who puts food on the table. If you want a career, you are well-advised to publish in prestigious places. If you’re in the business of giving practical advice, you do no favours by making a song and dance about how the thing that will get you a job is not a sign of quality. We can leave that sort of angst and double-think for once the salary is sorted.

Felix
Felix
Reply to  opinion haver
9 months ago

I mean, yeah, if you want a career, in the traditional sense, and to experience success, in the traditional sense, then it’s great to have advice like this. But there’s always that tension between what you have to do to get those things and what you have to do to be a good philosopher—in the sense that doesn’t necessarily invoke the image of professionalisation or what one might regard as a career. I think people should care about both, but that means always being mindful that career goals aren’t necessarily the same thing as life goals or philosophical goals, in that broad sense.

Some of your philosophical work will ultimately find no place in the story of your career, even if it ends up being important to you, and perhaps even important beyond that. It’s still work. Still deserving of the recognition of it being work. Still requires the same discipline and care. But won’t necessarily propel you to the heights of professional stardom. That’s fine, I think. But means having to contextualize one’s own work, and that of others, a bit differently.

Neil Mehta
Neil Mehta
Reply to  L. Y.
9 months ago

I think you’re absolutely right, L.Y., that work in prestigious venues is not always good and that work outside of prestigious venues is sometimes terrific. I can think of some bad papers in Phil. Review and some outstanding papers in much lower-ranked journals.

Still, I think that the average paper in a top-5 generalist journal is *significantly* stronger than the average paper in a lower-ranked generalist journal. I therefore think that prestige of publication venue is one *highly defeasible* measure of philosophical excellence.

I should have made this clearer in the guide. The real point is that I have plenty of colleagues who have done more work, and better work, than I have — and then there are all the terrific philosophers who are not my colleagues.

grant
grant
9 months ago

As a philosopher trained in the analytic tradition, I find this document very helpful. Meanwhile, I wonder if there is a similar sort of document talking about doing continental philosophy?

Patrick Lin
9 months ago

“Genius gives birth, talent delivers.” ― Jack Kerouac

Alexander Douglas
9 months ago

“At last, on the 19th try, I secured my first publication in Philosophical Studies, and even that was merely a reply piece.”

An alternative interpretation of this event is that peer review is largely a lottery, and if you buy enough tickets you eventually win*.

*that is: get assigned reviewers who aren’t sadistic pedants, obsessives glued to their hobby-horses, status-protecting gatekeepers, nerds using any small power they’re given to “work through” their issues with childhood bullying, etc.

Enzo Rossi
Reply to  Alexander Douglas
9 months ago

He revised the drafts and eventually got better at avoiding rejections though, so that suggests the opposite of your interpretation.

Neil Levy
Neil Levy
Reply to  Enzo Rossi
9 months ago

Peer review is very much a lottery, but it’s a lottery in which you can change your odds. I am very confident I have learned techniques that make it somewhat less likely my papers will be rejected (for the most part, these are also techniques for writing better papers).

No clear idea what they are, though! Mehta’s suggestions don’t resonate with me at all.

Enzo Rossi
Reply to  Neil Levy
9 months ago

Yes, it’s a weighted lottery of sorts. And writing technique is only one of the weights.

reviewer#3
reviewer#3
Reply to  Neil Levy
9 months ago

Peer review is very much a lottery, but it’s a lottery in which you can change your odds. 

May I ask precisely what you mean by this? Usually when we say that X is a lottery, we mean that the results of X are random. In the case of peer review, the implied consolation is often that someone who has received constant rejections need not be a poor philosopher–they are just unlucky, because rejection/acceptance is random! But you add that peer review is a lottery that doesn’t have fixed odds, and suggest that there are “techniques” that a philosopher can use to boost their odds. I am guessing that these techniques you have in mind isn’t simply submitting more papers to increase overall chance of acceptance, but more substantively, techniques that increase odds of a single submission being accepted. If so, then unlike the usual sense of lotteries, the result of a single submission isn’t randomly determined–so peer review isn’t a lottery after all.

Perhaps I am reading the metaphor more deeply than intended?

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Alexander Douglas
Reply to  reviewer#3
9 months ago

Maybe there are techniques that make it more likely you’ll get accepted by a certain reviewer, or by the reviewers typically chosen by a certain sub-editor. And it isn’t random when you’ll get that sub-editor: submitting on a certain topic, to a certain journal, makes it likely. But that sub-editor could be changed any day. So when you’re first trying to publish and know nothing about which biases are out there to be hacked, it’s pretty much a lottery. And in the long run, the whole thing is a lottery, since hackable biases come and go pretty randomly.

grymes
grymes
Reply to  reviewer#3
9 months ago

Many lotteries have weighted odds. E.g., https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/NBA_draft_lottery

Neil Levy
Neil Levy
Reply to  reviewer#3
9 months ago

Peer review doesn’t have fixed odds. The skills I have in mind are both conducive to writing objectively better papers and also, somewhat independently, papers that are more likely to pass peer review. As you acquire these skills, your odds of acceptance rise.

It remains a lottery since different reviewers have different biases (these biases may be reasonable- I wrote a book partly about that!). And the median verdict is still rejection. Still, the per submission odds are somewhat higher for me today than they were in the past.

Kenny Easwaran
Reply to  reviewer#3
9 months ago

Peer review is gambling with weighted dice. No matter what you do, you’re going to have to try repeatedly in order to get some winnings. But figuring out how to change the weights to make them more favorable is valuable. (It can also make it more likely that when you win, it’s not just a minor technical win, but actually a significant and satisfying win that even the audience can appreciate better.)

Nicolas Delon
Nicolas Delon
Reply to  Alexander Douglas
9 months ago

“No victor believes in chance.” — Nietzsche

M E Yeolekar
M E Yeolekar
9 months ago

Patience pays – to conclude from your opening statement. Agree that professional heights need not be gauged by the sheer number of publications , though it might be a criterion at early career stage. Appreciate the write up.

Neil Mehta
Neil Mehta
Reply to  M E Yeolekar
9 months ago

Thanks!

twphil
twphil
9 months ago

Hello, if Dr.Neil Mehta is reading, I found that in the fifth footnote, the link goes invalid due to the closure of Typepad site. Maybe it matters to some readers. Just an advice.

Last edited 9 months ago by twphil
Kenny Easwaran
9 months ago

I just read the whole thing. I think it’s all good, but I copied out some passages that I thought were particularly great:

Play with new ideas immediately. Students often think that they must read extensively before they can begin forming their own views. Not so: proper reading is continuous with original thinking. Hence, from the very first text that you encounter, try out your own ideas. Experiment with novel objections, arguments, theories, and taxonomies.

Writing is hard, and I often get stuck. When that happens, I do not try to solve the problem in my head; that, I have learned, is like waiting for Godot. For working memory is extremely limited – our minds can hold only 5-9 ideas at a time – so, if the solution is 10 steps away, it can never be found. Luckily, computer memory is effectively unlimited. Thus, I like to write my way through my problems. I start by describing the trouble: “My argument relies on premise p, but I don’t have any evidence for p.” Then I brainstorm solutions, jotting down any idea that occurs to me: “Maybe q is evidence for p.” If I realize that this solution doesn’t work, I can write that down, too: “No, q isn’t evidence for p because ….” I might then look for other evidence for p or try out a different argument that relies on some other premise. All of this, too, goes on the page. As a result, all of my work has been overhauled multiple times, and for every 10,000 words I publish, there are about 100,000 words that get scrapped. (Really. I have kept track.)

You will often wish to rely on claims that you cannot rigorously support. In such cases, jettison any arguments for those claims and introduce them as assumptions. Do not hesitate to make controversial assumptions as long as you identify them as such; just briefly mention the motivations for them and move on. State all assumptions at the outset, however, as your reader will feel cheated if you help yourself to controversial claims once the argument is underway. 

The replacement heuristic: State an important idea in one short sentence, underline key expressions, and try replacing those with related expressions. [followed by a long discussion and examples that are very worth reading!]

even the best heuristics mostly generate junk, so do not get attached to whatever ideas come first. Generate lots of ideas. Then sift through the dirt for those rare flecks of gold

More commonly, I think that a referee has missed the point, but that I can ensure that it is not missed again

Kenny Easwaran
9 months ago

One bit that I thought was understated was this passage:

Know that it is a long road between putting finger to keyboard and having your article accepted. It takes me about 4 months to put together a first submission, and, across all of my publications, there has been a median gap of 22 months between first submission and final acceptance. That brings the total to just over 2 years.

Looking at my own CV, it’s been over a decade since I had a paper take less than 2 years from initial writing to acceptance. Even before that, there’s probably only three or four solo-authored ones that were that quick (importantly including a couple of my first ones) and there are three or four more where a co-author got me to that point in that time. I’ve got three or four papers that were around 10 years from initial writing work to eventual acceptance. This obviously isn’t helpful for an early career person, but if you plan to stay in the career, then it’s worth knowing that it’s totally fine to have some ideas simmering on the back burner for a long time while you work on other things – as long as you have something coming out nearly every year, and some years have multiples.